Rowan: Act 1, Scene 1

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So, I decided to submit the first scene of my play, "Rowan," just to see if I can get any feedback. I'd really like any tips or ideas or critiques or comments. Something!

I'm not really sure yet where this is going. All I know is it's centered around the themes of love, loss, acceptance, pain and healing. And it's a drama. And there will be tears. Hopefully. If I can do it right. But yeah. The guards aren't really important characters. This scene is just setting the mood and the setting for the rest of the play, kinda like a prologue.

Oh, and Chiron is the guy from Greek mythology who rows people across the river Styx on their way to the underworld. Just in case anyone was wondering.

I hope it's good. I need feedback! Please!



P.S. I had no idea what category to put it under, since I didn't want to go through the trouble of fixing the italics on a txt file, so I submitted it the way does for "Spike."

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Edit: I deleted and re-iploaded scene 2 because I wanted to make name changes and fixing the original was giving me a hassle. Sorry if there's any confusion.

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